"The Pills."
The Pills.Franks frequent accidents were a cause for concern for his general practitioner. They were too frequent and coincidental for one thing, and so the doctor insisted Frank go into therapy. He...
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z......you need to space conversation.I used to have to grade papers for content and grammer.Shift this around.It will become more powerful.Used to grade papers.You got conversation..split it...
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Zaida,This is a real tension builder. I was not prepared for the direction it took. I have goosebumps!!sarahThe Peaceful Pub
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Dear Sarah, Thanks. I'm glad you liked this. The goose bumps is the kind of impact that I usually go for. Thanks for reading this. ZaidaSolante, I used to separate the dialogue, but stopped doing...
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I am still looking at this.I think first sentence should stand alone.Then paragraph.Paragraph may need to be split.sola
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And such seems the case of many-several who suffer from schizophrenia (most especially if they become wards of the state, but that is a wholly other issue.) A very well constructed story Zaida, and...
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So true, thank you po. And Solante, if you reformat this, maybe I can use it for a reference and my pace will improve. I appreciate your advice. I like the idea of the first sentences standing alone,...
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